Evil+Wish



​  **CREATIVE WRITING SKILLS CLS1323 TESL 08 C**
 * ASSIGMENT 3: PORTFOLIO**
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 881016085380 2. NASUHA BT. MOHAMED AMIN. 881003015842 3. KHAYAETIRY A/P MANI. 850925105842 4. JASWEEN KAUR A/P RAM SINGH 870225385060**
 * 1. NAFILAH NAFSIAH BT.MOHAMED ALI.

**1) Theme**


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What I Ask For? **

I ask for peace, With no voice, no war,

I ask for happy days, With no work, no tiredness

I ask for permanent health With no sick, no illness

I ask for much wealth, With no stop, no less

I ask for a true heart, With no secret, no hates

I ask for lasting relationship With no pain, no tears

I ask for sweet words With no harsh, no act

I ask for thankful friendship With no lies, no cheats

I ask for strength With no betrayal, no heartbreak

I ask for freedom, With no family, no love

I ask for all this things, And I didn’t get a thing.

Nothing of this happen, A dream only will be a dream.

I don’t want this life anymore. And now I ask for death.


 * 2) Setting**



**F o r e s t **

As the clock ticks, My mind wonders, Through the darkness of night, Through the shine of the moon, Through the twinkling of the stars, Gazing through the wonders of night, Realisation creeps slowly into me, Telling me the wonders of the forest,

Showing me the beauty of the forest, Singing me the joy of the forest, Crying me the troubles of the forest, Caused by none other than men, Who in reality, Are part of the nature. When will this truth be realised by men? Will it be on time? Or perhaps… Will it be too late?


 * 3) Characters**

Eclipse: World Of Desire

In the far away of the universe system, there exists one planet called Eclipse. This planet is surround by the glazing stars that shines for every second, days and night without any rest, the atmosphere is so fresh until it soaked in our mind, it is also known as the most beautiful planet that exist in the universe system. The technology is far more advanced with all the equipment and famous for the best inventor in the world. Along with all this strength, all perceptions and theories by the scientist can be done without any objection towards it. The peace of the planet is being triggered when the scientist started to do the experiment on the planet itself. They want to know, how strong the planet is and how long it can maintain the destruction of human being. But they do not know that someone was doing something behind their backs, someone that more strong and destructive than they ever thought. They would not realize it because everyone was busy with their own works. Until one day, they saw Dr Marcoh in his lab alone and looked suspiciously. But as usually they ignored him as the way it is which will make they regret for the rest of their life.

Dr. Marcoh is known as the most smart and intelligent scientist in Planet Eclipse. No one can beat him. He is around 40 years old with brown hair, tall and quite young look face than his real age, he has soft green eyes on one side and yellow star shines on the other side. Everyone think he is a weird person because of the colour of his eyes, but he will contribute an effortless discovery on their planet. This is what his comrades thought. While other scientists were busy experimenting on the planet, he is doing separate things, away from them. No one was paying attention to him, so this is his gold chance to fulfill what he is desire most. He discover the dark side of him that wanted to have special power; invisible, strong, immortal and the most crucial is that everyone will acknowledge his true self and obey to him. Dr Alex, his comrade accidently knows his planning and tried to stop him.

“Why were you doing like this? Is that the price for those who ignore you?Teased you? Betrayed you? Why! Why! and Why! ” said Dr Alex.

“Yes! They all deserved for what they have done to me. I will make myself strong and unbeatable. No one will be able to stop me! Even you! I will make this planet full with the intelligence people like me and obey my orders without any complaint. This is the world that I wanted! Ha Ha Ha. Don’t you dare to stop me or shall I vanished you like others” said Dr Marcoh.

“No! I can still stop you. It is not too late. You have not done anything yet. I’m sure I can stop you whenever I want” said Dr Alex.

“Oh I’m too scared to hear that! Don’t you think that I’m too stupid like you? Even do not realize that my plan was being corrupted by you. I am the smartest and the most intelligent scientist in this world! I already prepare for everything for this day to come. Yes! I have done something. Something that you cannot imagine what it is. Just stay with me and enjoys the beautiful views that I prepared for you” said Dr Marcoh. Dr Alex was wondered what has happen and then he saw the true self of Dr Marcoh. Dr Marcoh was drank something in his mouth. A red liquid with some bubble in it and was boiling like a hot water. The colour was red as the colour of the blood. Then Dr Marcoh changed into a big beast; with sharp claw, head like a combination of lion and elephant, a black tail with a lot of thorns in it, and two big legs like a dinosaur. It’s really horrible but the body is beautiful and shining as a diamond. Dr Alex was shocked to the maximum when he sees what is in front of his eyes. He cannot believe what he saw. It was unbelievable. He really changes into something that is not even a human. Dr Marcoh feels very proud that his experiment has succeeded and he can change into an incredible person that he always dreams of. He has the power to make people obey to him and the power of immortality. He now has the power of superhuman and psychic as well. He can do what ever he wants and no one can stop him. He can read people minds and no one is daring enough to sit close to him.

A moment later, everyone in the planet knows about Dr Marcoh’s power and his evil plan for them. A chaos occur; people busy running for their life, the building were all collapsed because of Dr Marcoh power, and the trees was in fire and the sea was pouring into their home. There is nothing that they can do except run for their life or followed Dr Marcoh to build an evil new world. With all of the chaos occurred, there was a group of scientist that were experimenting on their planet earlier has found something while they explode the underground of Planet Eclipse. They have awaked a big dragon that lives inside the underground. The dragon was blue in colour and holds a fire in its mouth. The dragon was very angry and attacked those scientists. However, there was a survivor and he managed to deliver the message to Dr Alex and asked for his help to destroy the dragon. Dr Alex looked as he has no ideas on how to destroy the dragon. Then only something comes in his mind. Dr Marcoh! Only he has the power to destroy the dragon but he maybe happy to hear that because he wants to destroy the whole mankind in this planet. He would not want to help them. Dr Alex was searching for Dr Marcoh in his lab and he found that Dr Marcoh was enjoyed seeing the scene that the dragon do to his planet. The dragon was attacked all the people in the planet and there was fire all over the trees and building. Dr Marcoh was laughing and at the same time was crying. Dr Alex feels really strange and thought that Dr Marcoh has become mad. Then he braves his self and went to approached Dr Marcoh.

“Err… Dr Marcoh? Are you okay? What is happening? Why are you becomes like this? said Dr Alex. “Oh, Alex. I’m okay. There is nothing wrong with me. What do you want? Have you changed your minds? You want to join me? said Dr Marcoh.

“No! I will not join you. I was just wondering to ask for your help to destroy the dragon but then you were enjoyed seeing the dragon destroy our planet. I do not know you anymore. You are not the person that I know when I was twenty years old. You back there was so kind and nice to me. You never think about how people though about you. But now, you have totally changed. Don’t you love our planet? Why you let it being destroyed by the dragon? You can save it if you want” said Dr Alex.

“Don’t talk nonsense! I…”

Suddenly, Dr Marcoh used his power to read Dr Alex minds to see whether he speak the truth or he also like other people who wants to take advantage on him. What he sees is only the truth. Dr Alex is speaking of the truth and loves him very much as a father. Then tears fall to his cheeks and he started to change into a human. But not all is going back to normal, Dr Marcoh still have his power and he can use it to fight with the dragon. Dr Alex was happy and he hugs Dr Marcoh to see that whether his ‘father’ is really change or it just the side effect of the liquid that he drank earlier. Then both of them cooperate with each other to fight the dragon and save their planet.



The dragon was so strong; Dr Marcoh has the difficulties to fight the dragon because he is too old to fight with him. If only he was younger, he would be able to finish the dragon in time. Then he drank again the red liquid to make him grow stronger than he was. The red liquid make him to change into the beast that everyone was afraid off. But it is for the sake of their planet so he was able to control his power and destroy the dragon. Everyone was very happy and thank Dr Marcoh for the deed that he makes for their planet. Dr Marcoh feels very happy as if he was really makes a good deed to his planet and feels sorry that he has become evil to everyone.

Dr Marcoh then used his power to protect his planet and most important is to protect his ‘son’, Dr Alex. The peace in the planet is now being gained by the superhero named Dr Marcoh with his incredible power.

**A Disheartening Hunting Trip **
 * 4) Plot**

Belly, I hope we will pass this examination and graduate by the end of this year. You know, my dad can’t just wait to see me wearing the ‘blue graduation hat’ so that he can show his colleagues my graduation photograph. Hey that’s funny Kim. You called it a blue graduation hat; I called it a passport that breaks us away from the college. It’s kinda a way for me to free myself so that I can go back to my village and enjoy my life there. I remembered dad’s words, “Jimmy, study hard my dear son. You must put your name down in the Imperial college son. I might not be beside you my boy, but remember my words and get an architectural degree so that you can walk back home with the pride I have lost years ago.” My dad planned to make the strategy of some building so that the government can develop our village for the profit of the villagers. This plan was disliked by the rich ones in the village. So, they decided to embarrassed dad by giving him a helping hand in planning the strategies but changing it right before the submission day. Dad handed the plan to them as he had trust in them. But bad luck doesn’t inform us before coming to our doorsteps. Everything failed and dad felt the humiliation very much. He started to hate the villagers and only had the hope on me since that day. He told me to fulfill his dreams before he died two years back. Hey Jimmy, chill dude. Kim and I have a surprise for you. Don’t you worry too much? All of us will pass with flying colours. “Thanks Belly,” said Jimmy. Jimmy had only joined the college and met Kim and Belly during their first year of their degree. Belly and Kim had been friends before that as they have been in the college to do their Diploma. Now 4 years have passed since three of them are friends. So Jimmy, don’t you want to know what’s the plan that we have come up with? Yah, I know. Oh yes Jimmy, you know what the plan is? It has to be some trips here and there. Am I right Belly? What do you say Kim? Wow! That’s great Jimmy. You have known our plans before we can tell you. What’s so great about our plans, Belly? We always enjoy going for trips. I have had such memorable time spent with both of you in all the trips that we have made. As usual, now we have to get all the things and materials ready before going for it. Let’s get back to our previous duties. That would be easy. Isn’t it correct Kim? Yes, I think Jimmy is right. So, see you then guys. We will move tomorrow at 6am. I will bring dad’s car as that’s my duty- ask dad’s permission. Both of you better get going now and bring all those items that we need. I am leaving Belly. See you Jimmy.

Hey, wait Kim. Belly, I think I will accompany Kim to her apartments. Don’t you forget to buy the food yea. As to survive for tonight, we will have to do with it. Belly, go and get the food fast otherwise the café is gonna be crowded. Quick. Jimmy instructed Belly with the preparation for the night dinner and left to catch Kim as she walks back to her apartment. Both of them discussed about the trip for tomorrow and separated. Kim entered her girls’ apartments whereby Jimmy waited until Kim’s figure disappears from his eyes. He then headed to his apartment and found Belly in the room. They chit chatted among each other when suddenly Jimmy’s phone rand and he headed out of the room. He sat in the balcony and chit chatted in the phone for an hour. Belly has been noticing Jimmy talking on the mobile phone for about a year. Belly was curious to know the person on the other part of the phone as he thought Jimmy had a girlfriend and he is trying to hide it from him. But in his few attempts to find out the caller, he managed to discover that it was Jimmy’s brother William. Jimmy told Belly that William has been managing the paddy fields in the village. Belly trusted Jimmy and did not bother to ask Jimmy about the phone calls that he usually received at night. After about an hour, Jimmy returned to the room. “How’s William Jimmy?” Belly asked Jimmy. Oh, he is fine. I told him about our plans for the trip tomorrow and he found it GREAT. Belly, so what time are we moving tomorrow? Kim and I planned to leave at 6am in the morning. As they were packing all the items in the bags, both of them did not communicate. Belly finished packing earlier and then he decided to sleep. Hey Jim boy, I’m gonna sleep now. It’s already 12 midnight. Once you are done packing, switch of the light. My eyes aches and we need to get up fast. Ok Belly. As it was half-past twelve, Jimmy’s phone rang once again. Jimmy switched off the room light and decided to go out of the room to answer the call. He started to talk on the phone when Belly called for Jimmy and there was no answer. Jimmy planned to find for Belly and he heard a voice, ‘I love you Kim and I promise not to leave you my love”. Belly was shock to hear the utterances of Jimmy. He could not believe what he heard. He then switched on the light and called for Jimmy. He was very angry and startled. He eyes were red and it was filled with tears, his hands gripped the wood of the bed and he was trembling. He could not believe what he had heard. “I’ll talk to you tomorrow my love, you take care and I love you Kim” said Jimmy. He then rushed to the room as he didn’t wanted Belly to know that he had been talking to Kim all this while all the nights. It was not his Brother. His brother has only called twice since Jimmy knew Belly. Jimmy could not figure out on what to say to Belly, so he decided to lie that all the night-calls that Jimmy has received was from his brother. As Jimmy entered the room, Belly asked him, “Do you love Kim, Jimmy?” Jimmy was afraid to answer Belly’s question as it was a secret that he has to still keep until they graduate. The excited night suddenly turned into a disheartening night as both of them had to talk upon this matter. Jimmy was not brave enough to reveal the truth but Belly managed to provoke Jimmy to express and Belly got very angry with Jimmy. Belly told Jimmy that he was very disaapointed with Jimmy and he wanted to cancel the trip. Jimmy persuaded Belly and he manged to convince him not to cancel the trip as they have planned this trip together. Belly, don’t be angry with me. I am sorry for not telling you the truth. You are my friend and I suppose to tell you the truth. But Belly, I have to keep Kim’s promise. She wanted to hide the truth from everyone until she graduates. Jimmy, I think we should sleep. What is the problem Belly? What happened? Is there something wrong with you? What made you so angry? Jimmy kept on pestering Belly and he didn’t want to tell him. After begging for his answer for about 5 minutes, Belly burst and said I LOVE KIM. I love her since 6 years ago. You have been into our live just 4 years back, but we have known each other for 6 years. I love her before you could have loved her. I believe she loved me too. I will kill those who interrupt my way. Kim is mine and she is my possession. Kim has no rights to betray me. If she has done this, then it must be because of you, Jimmy. I just wished to kill you Jimmy. How dare you come in between both of us? I was startled for a moment. I quietly switched off the light the night just passed like that. Belly’s words kept on running in my mind and ears. The alarm rang and I woke up in the morning. Belly didn’t talk to me in the morning. Both of us packed our last things quietly and left the house to fetch Kim. Kim doesn’t know anything, I thought in my mind. I don’t want to spoil her joy of this trip. As we reached Kim’s apartment, we saw her waving at us. She then opened the door and sat beside me. I could see Belly’s face crying in pain. I didn’t know what to do? I cannot think of a solution at that time as Kim started to communicate with Bely and I could see all the interesting topics and excitements Belly promise to show Kim at the hunting trip. We then finally reached the Jungle and I saw Belly having a gun with him. I could see him staring at me every each time Kim comes near me. He avoided me and the fun was not there. Kim spoke to both of us very well but we didn’t have any communication due to the incident happened early in the morning. Then, we headed into the jungle and I kept on remembering last night’s incident. I could not think on what I should do? I loved Kim very much. Kim does not know that Belly loves her too. She will be disheartened to know that as she has always accepted Belly as her good friend. Belly thinks it on the oppose. He believes that Kim had feeling for her till I came into the college. My mind was so busy thinking all the complications when Kim suddenly hugged me from the back. I missed you so much Jimmy. Why are you so sad? Why aren’t you speaking to Belly, Jimmy? Hey lets enjoy this moment. It’s our last trip and after this we are not gonna enjoy this adventures anymore. Jimmy was very disturbed as he was afraid of Belly. He was just a low-class farmer’s boy. He had been in a deep stress when he had to calm and view a lot of things happened in the village during the betrayal period. Jimmy’s father, who was only a farmer, tried to improve others’ life a few years ago was just seen as a trash. That was because he challenged the upper class rich people. Jimmy could reflect the previous incident and he was afraid of Belly. He was afraid of losing Kim. He was afraid of the gun owned by Belly. He was afraid for Kim. Thus, all this scare him more than the adventurous trip. “Let’s rest, Jimmy” called Kim as they headed to an empty area in the jungle. They had planned to make a camp here rest for the night. Jimmy started shivering in fear and kept himself quiet. Kim tried to talk to him but he refused to talk anything. She didn’t want to talk more as Belly was in front of her. They normally chatted at night through their mobile phones and it has been one of the top secret of their life all this while. So Kim thought she would try to talk to him as soon as Belly when to sleep. After having some sandwiches together, Belly planned to rest. Jimmy still remained quiet and stationary for all the while they were enjoying and laughing throughout eating their dinner. Kim signaled Jimmy a flying kiss and she headed into her camp. By the time, Belly was already in his camp and Jimmy headed to his camp too. Jimmy was alone in his camp and he started to feel that Belly would harm him this night. He could not think of anything else. Belly’s words ran in his mind and he wasn’t sure of what to do. He felt a cold chill ran through his body. He kept his things aside and started unpacking his things from the bag. He tried to close his eyes and he wanted to just forget Belly’s words. But it disappointed him, as he could not sleep and he sensed some noises at the entrance of his tent. He thought Belly has come to meet him. He could imagine the gun in Belly’s hand. He remembered Belly’s face expression in the car when Kim headed to sit beside him instead of Belly. That boy with his muscular body was a very brave boy. He also had a bad temper, and this is the reason why Jimmy is very afraid of Belly. “Who is there? Is it you Belly?” asked Jimmy. He then sensed a black colour item moving outside his tent. He tried to move closer to the thing and he took one wood stick that was kept beside him. “It was just for the sake of protecting myself incase Belly plans to kills me,” thought Jimmy. His words have been hunting me for the whole day and I have had a restless day and night thinking about him. Kris… kris… kriss… Jimmy could hear all this sounds and he heart pounded harder. He felt very afraid and his started to shiver. Belly has planned to kill me because he thought I have taken away his love from him and he wants me to vanish from this world. Jimmy wondered that I am going to be killed today and my love Kim will be in danger, my dad’s wishes, and my graduation and … Jimmy my love, are you asleep? Oh gosh! You Kim! You scared me to my death. “I thought Belly came to kill me” said Jimmy. Why on earth Belly would come here to kill you. We came here for hunting and it’s not to kill you me dear. Jimmy… He didn’t utter a word. What has been happening, you looked disturb. Why would Belly kill you? After persuading him for about half an hour, he finally revealed everything. Okay, I will tell you Kim. Sit here. Jimmy you are soaked with sweat and you are so nervous. Actually, Belly caught us talking last night and he was shocked to know that we are coupled up. I am afraid that he will kill me because last night he threatened me saying that I am going to kill you Jimmy. So I could sense him coming to me all the time to kill me. I am so afraid Kim. At that time, Belly suddenly burst in. Belly was standing behind the camp when Jimmy told Kim everything. Only then Belly reliased that Kim proposed Jimmy at first and she had fallen in love with Jimmy from the first day since she has ever met him. Belly heard Kim revealed everything that Belly didn’t know. Kim told Jimmy that she would want to talk to Belly and explain everything to him. As soon as that, Kim heard a sound calling for her name. Kim! You didn’t love me all this while. You loved Jimmy! Yes Belly. He is the one who I have loved since I met. He is the guy I have loved. He is my first love. I am sorry if it hurts you Belly. I love Jimmy. Belly apologized from Jimmy and he told Kim that he loved her since he knew her in the class. Then, Jimmy expressed his fear to Belly. He told Belly not to repeat the word- I will kill you in future. That is not good. Kill sounds as a death. Then all of the three friends went back to their camps and slept well. In the morning all three of them left the jungle after hunting happily.


 * 5) Point of view**



__ ** “I see you” ** __

When I think of her, It feels like it was all a dream. She is distant figure now, Like those stars, And I’m one of those eyes to watch her. Since I can see stars everywhere, Even if I don’t want to, I can always see her.

Her eyes was once on me, But I can’t see her that time. It’s frustrating to think I can’t see her, Back then, It was only one step, But I let her go. Even if my hands are wide open now, Even if I reach out my hands, I had already given up that day, And she is gone now.

I’m thinking about this, Feel something is lost in the heart. Can anyone tell her? Tell her I can see her now. I can see her enough to know she is there.

Can you really see me? But even though I’m here right now, You can’t see me very well, You can’t see that it is different now. We are travelling together, But still there is a distance between us, Like the two side of river never meets. We met but not actually met, Like the shadow in the mirror.

Maybe it was only that far, We weren’t destined together. Even if you can see me now, Please pretend like you don’t. The time has come, so, I’ll pretend like I don’t see you either.


 * 6) Tone & Style**

**The Miserable Life of Education **

A B C is the start of the life, Which smashes the entire brain- say it over an over an over. Books are ladders towards knowledge, Which ruins the entire day- read memorize and read. No Television… No entertainment… No outings No Games… Such a boring life! Is that life? Schools are the international prisons, Which confines the enjoyment of the life in the world. Report card is like a knot tied on a wire, Which cannot be changed, Get scolded, whacked and slapped. Teachers are as monsters, Ready to eat you at any time. Students look as fleshy as red meats to them. Does it benefit either way? … Does your heart pump faster in front of a pressure cooker? As it pressures you, Education is an immense pressure to the human community. Do you agree with me? 